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You are not what I fear
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Be not proud death
For you are not what I fear
For neither are you what I crave
A pain like no other given by you
Creates a world full of my anger.
A loss that cannot be bared
Becomes my world of grief.
Be not proud death
For you are not what I fear
For neither are you what I crave
A confined area within my mind
Consists solely of your presence.
A slight admiration of the power you withhold
But more admiration for how you intrigue my thought.
Be not proud death
For you are not what I fear
For neither are you what I crave
For you are not what I fear
For neither are you what I crave
A pain like no other given by you
Creates a world full of my anger.
A loss that cannot be bared
Becomes my world of grief.
Be not proud death
For you are not what I fear
For neither are you what I crave
A confined area within my mind
Consists solely of your presence.
A slight admiration of the power you withhold
But more admiration for how you intrigue my thought.
Be not proud death
For you are not what I fear
For neither are you what I crave
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Okies, well mr 
showed me some poems earlier and I read this poem, and it kinda inspired me to write it how I see it so I don;t think tis copying (I hope) Anyhoo the poem is called:
Be not proud death ~ John Donne... tis rather amazing
showed me some poems earlier and I read this poem, and it kinda inspired me to write it how I see it so I don;t think tis copying (I hope) Anyhoo the poem is called:Be not proud death ~ John Donne... tis rather amazing
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Very well written 
You definitely aren't copying;
The intention of a poem is to inspire as does life.
The first stanza is so simple, yet has so much meaning.
" confined area within my mind
Consists solely of your presence.
A slight admiration of the power you withhold
But more admiration for how you intrigue my thought."
That!
Is just excellent (to put it simply).
I liked this much much
You definitely aren't copying;
The intention of a poem is to inspire as does life.
The first stanza is so simple, yet has so much meaning.
" confined area within my mind
Consists solely of your presence.
A slight admiration of the power you withhold
But more admiration for how you intrigue my thought."
That!
Is just excellent (to put it simply).
I liked this much much